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the measure of one breath
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: January 24, 2022 07:02PM

the measure of one breath

my chain cut into my fingers
testified against fragile skin

I still heard the hollow no
to my morning plea

Still heard the yes
to who I was
who I was

the swinging door wooshes against possibility

my breathin’ –close, tight, shallow—
how deep in the eye
does the prism answer
with its angles?


Re: the measure of one breath
Posted by: UPMarty (71.87.67.---)
Date: January 24, 2022 11:29PM

wow, Peter. I'm sensing something different with your recent posts. I'm not sure what it is, but I like it.

Mary


Re: the measure of one breath
Posted by: Merc (75.208.75.---)
Date: January 24, 2022 11:31PM

He got his foot caught in the door, it changed his outlook on life.


Re: the measure of one breath
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: January 25, 2022 12:21AM

eyup...to both, M. & M.

Peter


Re: the measure of one breath
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: January 25, 2022 09:15PM

Here's the other version of this one, done the same day:
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the measure of one breath

my chain cut into my fingers
testified against the fragile skin

I still heard the hollow no
to my morning plea

How much fleece do I need
to cover my soul?

She still heard the yes
to who I was
who I was

At Circe’s Gate

the swinging door wooshes against possibility

For my one-eyed darkness

my breathin’ –close, tight, shallow—
how deep in the eye
does the prism answer
with its angles?

Can you still hear my hurt.
Diana, leaving the forest?




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