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thoughts on the war
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: January 16, 2022 11:10AM

thoughts on the war


the river came onto the banks
and took some more leaves today


Re: thoughts on the war
Posted by: valerie-v (92.40.210.---)
Date: January 16, 2022 11:18AM

I sit on the floor now.


Re: thoughts on the war
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: January 16, 2022 11:21AM

Thanks for reading and responding.

Peter


Re: thoughts on the war
Posted by: Merc (75.211.97.---)
Date: January 16, 2022 12:46PM

Some will get what they seek
Some will lose part of what they have
Some will lose their lives
None will get what they want.


Re: thoughts on the war
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: January 16, 2022 06:26PM

aye, mate.


Re: thoughts on the war
Posted by: obiwan (72.141.185.---)
Date: January 25, 2022 06:37PM

unfortunately, some will profit from pain


Re: thoughts on the war
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: January 25, 2022 09:02PM

that, too.

Thanks for looking in,

Peter


Re: thoughts on the war
Posted by: Merc (75.209.193.---)
Date: January 26, 2022 11:44AM

Now profiting from pain, I'm not totally against.


Re: thoughts on the war
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: January 28, 2022 01:27AM

why? you got stocks in the pharmaceutical companies?


Re: thoughts on the war
Posted by: Merc (75.208.42.---)
Date: January 29, 2022 01:05PM

Well, yes, and for many years I've been paid pretty well to cause some pain on occation, and paid as well for trying to relieve pain caused by others. Pain is nautures way of telling you that the other guy drew first.




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