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--Untitled Love Poem--
Posted by: Aaron (71.193.157.---)
Date: January 13, 2022 10:01PM

Before, when my mind
Skipped over what wasn’t words-
I could balance it all here
And sleep would welcome the folded

Then sweetly, and without sound
You entered a dream
Taking me by the corners
And I you by the corners

Now, unfolded
Together - thin on an altar
Made of wood and darkness
Deep all around - we pull our corners

Your tears seal us in
I into you, and you into me
My mind skips over the lines
I can balance it again
And sleep welcomes the folded

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 01/14/2009 01:14AM by Aaron.


Re: --Untitled Love Poem--
Posted by: frost42_24 (32.138.134.---)
Date: January 13, 2022 11:39PM

I totally love this.


Re: --Untitled Love Poem--
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: January 13, 2022 11:39PM

I like


but, alter or altar?

Peter


Re: --Untitled Love Poem--
Posted by: Aaron (71.193.157.---)
Date: January 14, 2022 01:15AM

Thanks Frost and Peter




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