Early morning, hanging in the air
ever bright, burning sun.
Two souls find themselves together
two souls give their word
two souls intend to keep their promise

Early morning, hanging in the air
ever bright, burning sun.
One soul finds himself alone
one soul keeps his word
one soul kept his promise

One soul journeys alone,
forever lost.

I'm aware I am not the best at expressing myself in poem form so I am open to any suggestions as to where I can improve upoun this piece.

Edited 3 time(s). Last edit at 01/11/2021 04:10PM by ThatOneGuy.

Welcome to the mule.

Yes, welcome. This is a nice start and the best advice for any poet is to keep writing.

Relax, we're a lot more layed back that most places.

Thanks, I know that some places have alot of people who aren't very nice to others in the sense that they think they are much better than you anytime.

I'll have to post some more later I'm sure I could scrounge something else up from my head.

Well, poetically speaking, I'm not that great, ha!

I like it as is. Relax and make yourself at home.