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No Way
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: January 10, 2022 12:31AM

No Way

: method means technique correction mode system approach manner line of attack

You’re not in my way.
I don’t have a way today.
That’s how I feel today.

Kitchen conversation,
Set for no automatic correction.

Nothing is correct
Spell check can’t detect
my swerve from the path.

Once again
everything rhymes
whether it does or not.

page 60 runtime error
the computer is talking to me again
telling me its error
and what I will suffer
the consequences for again.

my roommate
went back
into her room.

the punctuation
is inconsistent...
me too.

the poems grow
by accretion
like a thought
or a conversation

the computer doesn’t know
the word for random accumulation

at the sea the rocks
know the growth of barnacles
growth that follows
only the laws of chaos

life, it seems, is not logical

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 01/10/2021 12:56AM by petersz.


Re: No Way
Posted by: Merc (75.208.72.---)
Date: January 10, 2022 01:44AM

so way...


Re: No Way
Posted by: Gouwerijns (86.92.240.---)
Date: January 27, 2022 08:31AM

cool ! writings love it has a cute beat to it and indeed life is filled with things that show that the logical is non-logical.

Gouwerijn

My moto's Those who ask question shall know answers.:>>> wie vraagt wie weet. Those who darenot ask shall never know. ::>>> wie niet vraagt wie niet weet.


Re: No Way
Posted by: Steevo (69.19.14.---)
Date: January 27, 2022 03:00PM

No logic, no answers, no mercy. No Way, pretty much says it.
Good one.


Re: No Way
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: January 28, 2022 01:22AM

Thanks for visiting my little meditation, Merc, Carolyn and Steevo...

amo,

Peter


Re: No Way
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.185.193.---)
Date: January 29, 2022 09:27PM

Peter, the last line is a classic.


Re: No Way
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: January 29, 2022 11:27PM

Thanks, frosty,

Peter




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