i had in half dream state
the best of all ideas
to work and strive to open up
a poetry cafe

a place to drink
a place to share
dark coffee with rum and beer
a poetry cafe

to print all unknown works
to leave the pages bare
for those who compose
a poetry cafe

walls lined with
anonymous philosophers
tables chairs and register
in the backroom a single bed
a poetry cafe

it is a not uncommon dream, obiwan.

Peter

obiwan:

A wonderful dream, well-expressed. May it come true.

Joe

Obiwan,

I'd say the line breaks don't work as punctuation, I stumbled a few times, either punctuate or re-address your breaks?

Otherwise very nice, like the image of the single bed, and "best of all ideas" very Dickensian.

Hope to see more of your stuff.

Cheers
Kris