Come, make a dream with me
Spring is almost on us
And the gardens want their green.

Very generous invitation. I love this poem Joe, especially in winter! It is so warm in contrast.

K.Q.

Sweet. Simple. Nice.
Lucky Patricia

Pure poetry, Joe

Khalida:

You are always welcome to dream along. Glad you liked the poem.

Steve:

Lucky me, is more like it.

Ian:

What a nice comment.

Thank you, all.

Joe

I bet there's much more than luck at work here, Joe, but lucky both of you. Lovely sentiment and poetry.

Mary

I like all three lines and the order you put them in.

Thank you Mary and Peter. I appreciate your taking the time to read and to comment.

Joe

Perfectly crafted romance...

Frosty:

I'm glad you think so. Thank you.

Joe

indeed I do.

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Steevo:

Thanks.

Joe

A modern haiku hpesoj. The brevity is powerfully verbose
in its simplicity. I love poets who can master power in
conservation and you have done it. tom

Tom:

Once in awhile the muse seems to hit a home run. Thanks for your kind comment.

Joe

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Beautiful brevity Joe and I am soooooooo envious.
This is great writing. tom

Peter and Tom:

Many thanks.

Joe