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gravity
Posted by: frost42_24 (68.51.93.---)
Date: December 30, 2021 03:28PM
oh, great aching
the pull
the weight
of unknowns
obligations and
constraints-
the pressure
of being held
to this earth
when it is
in our nature
to fly
Re: gravity
Posted by: les712 (68.185.69.---)
Date: December 30, 2021 05:18PM
Sherry, I really like this ditty. As is my inclination, it reminds me of a song. Check out the Buffalo Springfield selection on lyric central.
Les
Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 12/31/2008 03:09AM by les712.
Re: gravity
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.241.---)
Date: December 30, 2021 05:49PM
Frosty:
Very nice. I think it interesting that you, as a woman, are offering this perspective. To hear most women I know tell it, men are the only creatures who have it in their "nature to fly."
Joe
Re: gravity
Posted by: frost42_24 (32.146.192.---)
Date: December 30, 2021 06:29PM
Les,thanks for the feeedback and the song- I'll check it. Joe, I've been restless since I came in to this world...and dreaming of flying. 
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