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Wind Voice
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: December 26, 2021 09:29PM

Wind Voice

After reading ‘THE TOWERS’ by Neeli Cherkovski

Where Walt Whitman lay dreaming of
Buddhas reclining in long alphabetic lines
Waiting for William Blake to sort out
The soot of civilization,
Preparing the morning edition,
Printed on angels’ wings
We read the languor of burning towers
Penetrated by the lightest wind --
The morning can prepare
Only to find no one is listening
To our hearts
Grow still.


Re: Wind Voice
Posted by: les712 (68.185.69.---)
Date: December 29, 2021 03:33PM

Nicely done, Peter. To me this is perhaps one of the stronger efforts of your poems based on Cherkovoski's work.


Les


Re: Wind Voice
Posted by: Steevo (66.82.9.---)
Date: December 29, 2021 04:17PM

Peter.
I admire your devotion to your art. This strikes a chord, though I've never read a single line of Neeli Cherkovski before today.

It's good to know there are still poets willing to speak out against war and injustice.

"Only to find no one is listening
To our hearts
Grow still."

Yes, I wonder when the readers will arrive.


Re: Wind Voice
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: December 29, 2021 04:54PM

Thank you both, Les and Steve, for listening and commenting.

Peter




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