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The Line
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: December 26, 2021 09:26PM

The Line

After reading ‘WHILE VISITING SAM’ by Neeli Cherkovski

the stasis of exhaustion
overcomes the conflict
between memories’ flickering
image
and the present need
for the present


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Re: The Line
Posted by: UPMarty (24.247.69.---)
Date: December 28, 2021 02:37AM

I can really identify with these lines, Peter. Nice poems inspired by Mr. Cherkovski. I looked him up and see that he is a known poet in your area.

Mary


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Re: The Line
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: December 28, 2021 03:02PM

Yes. Neeli has been active here for quite a while and deserves more attention to his poetry.

Peter


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