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Equipoise
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (71.249.169.---)
Date: December 23, 2021 01:00PM

In a disharmonious, gaseous plea
That turned a deposit into minerals
It was mirthless in its lightheartedness,
Apathetic and devoid of understanding

Underhandedly, and reciting chants
At a mirror at the entrance to the stockyard
That the opposite of hate, being tolerated,
Serenaded and it wasn’t too demanding


Re: Equipoise
Posted by: lifeisbutadream (94.249.73.---)
Date: December 23, 2021 03:32PM

sounds quite harmonious to me!

K.Q.


Re: Equipoise
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (68.194.80.---)
Date: December 23, 2021 04:30PM

It's slightly askew, but these things have a way of balancing themselves out


Re: Equipoise
Posted by: les712 (68.185.69.---)
Date: December 23, 2021 08:00PM

Good one, Johnny, I can actually relate to this.

Namaste.


Les


Re: Equipoise
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (68.194.80.---)
Date: December 24, 2021 09:59AM

Thanks Les

Et cum spiritu tuo


Re: Equipoise
Posted by: Merc (75.211.33.---)
Date: December 26, 2021 10:55AM

I am related to a gaseous plea.. or maybe it's that people plea with me to less gasssss........... oh never mind.




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