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ENCHANTMENT OF LOVE - Naked Truth of a Common Man 101 Poems
Posted by: gwhutson (114.30.100.---)
Date: December 22, 2021 07:41AM

ENCHANTMENT OF LOVE

Enchantment upon waters that run deep,
my soul soaring high, never more to weep,
gladly giving to joy for the feel like heaven, full of stars,
brings happiness beyond compare.

The search for love has been long,
and yesterday is now gone,
for today I feel strong, I have found what I have looked for,
and it is you.

The tears are gone and rapture to the degree,
for love has touched you and me, giving over to life a sweetness
that vanquished bitterness and strife,
never more the loneliness of the abyss,
for it has no power.

Our love shall stand like a mighty tower,
giving hope where there had been none before.


Re: ENCHANTMENT OF LOVE - Naked Truth of a Common Man 101 Poems
Posted by: les712 (68.185.69.---)
Date: December 24, 2021 03:18AM

Rapture to the degree

I'm not sure what that means, but I like the theme of this one. If you want the respect of people on this forum though, I would recommend interacting with the others who post here, rather than just spamming us with ads for your book.


Les


Re: ENCHANTMENT OF LOVE - Naked Truth of a Common Man 101 Poems
Posted by: Merc (75.211.33.---)
Date: December 26, 2021 10:34AM

Les, you are a master of the language.


Re: ENCHANTMENT OF LOVE - Naked Truth of a Common Man 101 Poems
Posted by: les712 (68.185.69.---)
Date: December 27, 2021 04:59AM

Thanks, Mr. T.


Les




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