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A LADY - The Naked Truth of A Common Man 101 Poems
Posted by: gwhutson (130.220.166.---)
Date: December 16, 2021 08:44PM

A LADY

A lady is here in my life and it's good to see my fair-skinned goddess
shimmering in the moonlight.

What delights she brings me for indeed I find her irresistible
and her touch a thrill that cannot be found anywhere else in the world.

When I hold her in my arms the feel is so real as my heart sings a joyful song.

I know no doubts that this woman touches me deeply and I shall want her always.

As we walk this life together there will be a love that cannot be broken
and it will guide us through whatever trials that shall be laid before us.

As we walk this path that has been given to us all I have to do
to find the comfort that I will need is to reach out and touch her hand.

Bands of angels guard us from harm and it will be
forever that her kisses will give me the strength to take
whatever steps there are to be taken in my life..


Re: A LADY - The Naked Truth of A Common Man 101 Poems
Posted by: UPMarty (71.86.181.---)
Date: December 16, 2021 10:50PM

Really nice, GW.

Marty


Re: A LADY - The Naked Truth of A Common Man 101 Poems
Posted by: obiwan (24.81.23.---)
Date: December 22, 2021 09:02AM

hey nice poem

"When I hold her in my arms the feel is so real as my heart sings a joyful song. "

I miss that. Hoping to feel that way again after I rip off the band-aid.


Re: A LADY - The Naked Truth of A Common Man 101 Poems
Posted by: Merc (75.209.235.---)
Date: December 22, 2021 11:12AM

GW I got nothing against you OK? Spent a lot of time in Idaho maownself. Drove over the road until I wanted to puke. We actually have quite a bit in common. Boise ain't one of them.. far too big. Like what you write that I've read.

Having laid that peaceful groundwork,, anyone here got a problem with GW commerializing this site? Every posting has a method to getting to purchase his book.


Re: A LADY - The Naked Truth of A Common Man 101 Poems
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (68.194.80.---)
Date: December 22, 2021 01:16PM

Why should I buy poems when I can write my own?


Re: A LADY - The Naked Truth of A Common Man 101 Poems
Posted by: redmitten (216.187.184.---)
Date: December 23, 2021 05:36PM

yes merc. i feel a little used.


Re: A LADY - The Naked Truth of A Common Man 101 Poems
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.241.---)
Date: December 24, 2021 08:08AM

I wouldn't mind so much if the poems were really good. Those I've read so far are fairly pedestrian, using almost no poetic devices and with little originality.

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 12/24/2008 08:09AM by hpesoj.


Re: A LADY - The Naked Truth of A Common Man 101 Poems
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (71.249.169.---)
Date: December 24, 2021 09:51AM

No one's putting a poetic device to your head and saying Buy Buy Buy, now, are they?


Re: A LADY - The Naked Truth of A Common Man 101 Poems
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.241.---)
Date: December 24, 2021 02:08PM

I only buy from pedestrian poets who write verse while crossing the street.

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 12/24/2008 02:08PM by hpesoj.


Re: A LADY - The Naked Truth of A Common Man 101 Poems
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (24.189.156.---)
Date: December 24, 2021 05:51PM

I'm not allowed to cross the street in the middle in the middle in the middle of the block


Re: A LADY - The Naked Truth of A Common Man 101 Poems
Posted by: IanAKB (124.168.103.---)
Date: December 25, 2021 06:36PM

Some movie trailers serve the useful purpose of showing me that the movie promoted is not the kind that I would enjoy.

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 12/25/2008 07:59PM by IanAKB.


Re: A LADY - The Naked Truth of A Common Man 101 Poems
Posted by: IanAKB (124.168.103.---)
Date: December 25, 2021 06:47PM

I'm not allowed to cross the street in the middle in the middle in the middle...

It’s a muddle in the middle.
Like some tarradiddle riddle,
'Twill befuddle those who toddle.
It’s no doddle if you dawdle.
You can’t widdle when you waddle
Though there’s piddle in a puddle
Where a poodle stood astraddle.
So have done with fiddle faddle.
No more twaddle. Best skedaddle.

Edited 3 time(s). Last edit at 12/26/2008 05:54PM by IanAKB.


Re: A LADY - The Naked Truth of A Common Man 101 Poems
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (24.189.156.---)
Date: December 25, 2021 09:29PM

Joe's probably the only one here who knows what I'm referring to

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 12/25/2008 09:29PM by JohnnyBoy.


Re: A LADY - The Naked Truth of A Common Man 101 Poems
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.241.---)
Date: December 26, 2021 09:35AM

I guess it was primarily a New York metro area thing awhile back. For those who never had the pleasure, you can hear what you missed here:

[www.websitetoolbox.com] />
Click on the second link inside the text box.

Joe

Edited 2 time(s). Last edit at 12/26/2008 09:36AM by hpesoj.


Re: A LADY - The Naked Truth of A Common Man 101 Poems
Posted by: Merc (75.211.33.---)
Date: December 26, 2021 10:19AM

Ian, I actually thought of Poe when I read your comment.

"In the icy air of night, how they tinkle with delight"

My darling spouse has a friend named Lenora, who again incites Poe.

singing now "Ahhhhmmmm jus' a Poe boy..."


Re: A LADY - The Naked Truth of A Common Man 101 Poems
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.241.---)
Date: December 26, 2021 12:23PM

There you go again, Terry, using any exccuse to tintinnabulate....better watch it or you'll need glasses soon.

Joe


Re: A LADY - The Naked Truth of A Common Man 101 Poems
Posted by: Merc (75.211.64.---)
Date: December 27, 2021 11:23AM

Got new bifocals about ten years ago. Left the Dr's office and went down a flight of stairs. Like to kilt maself. Bought a pair of readers +175 and have never gone back to the eyedoc.




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