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reasoning
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.185.193.---)
Date: December 08, 2021 10:30PM

rolling grays
the placid sky
cloudless
but suggesting
it might be
slightly disgruntled
mimicks my mood
as today I too
search for clarity


Re: reasoning
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: December 09, 2021 01:47AM

I like.


Re: reasoning
Posted by: les712 (68.185.69.---)
Date: December 09, 2021 04:27AM

Amazing how the weather often colors are moods. Nicely done, Frosty.

Les


Re: reasoning
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.241.---)
Date: December 09, 2021 07:12AM

Frosty:

Said with brevity, clarity and vivid imagery. In short, a very nice short poem.

Joe


Re: reasoning
Posted by: Merc (75.210.209.---)
Date: December 09, 2021 10:22AM

Weather=moods,, so very true. ferinstance, it's raining in my desert today, and I'm pretty sad. I look like an unhappy bassett hound. I'm gonna go cry.


Or I may just shoot someone's cat.



anyway, I liked the poem Frosty. Nicely done.


Re: reasoning
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.185.193.---)
Date: December 09, 2021 02:21PM

Peter, I'm glad you like. I wasn't sure this was even decent enough to post but since I've had a hard time coming up with anything lately, I thought I'd go ahead and toss it up. So thanks.

Les, yes...we've had some decent temps but clouds for weeks and I noticed yesterday that I felt a little sad for no reason that I could think of.

Joe, if you've read many of my poems, you'll know short and sweet is usually not my forte so I especially appreciate your comments!

Merc, I feel your pain! But I tell myself, despite the weather there's a million things in life in which I can find joy. If nothing else works, I start making fake laugh noises out loud to myself. I keep doing it -mixing up the fake laugh styles until the ridiculous noise of it all makes me start laughing for REAL. And YES, people, I actually DO THIS. It works. If you don't believe it, try it out sometime. You won't be sorry.




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