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You Crazy Russian, You
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: December 05, 2021 03:02AM

You Crazy Russian, You

I forgive her:
She introduced me
To the sensuous qualities
Of folded paper.
She saw through color
Like the man who saw through time—
Evolutionary island,
Glacial, even,
In the movement of her mind.
I only wished
I could wait for her.

Or staring cross-legged
At a photograph of the letter ‘N’
In the dark corner of sound
While the night split open
Just a crack
For me to make my escape
Into taut perception and pain.

There is no stasis
While her eyes begin
And I eat my hunger
For midnight.


Re: You Crazy Russian, You
Posted by: les712 (68.185.69.---)
Date: December 05, 2021 05:40AM

Nicely done, Peter, nothing to spoil the mood in this one, a fine read.

Les


Re: You Crazy Russian, You
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: December 05, 2021 06:55AM

Thanks, Les,

Peter


Re: You Crazy Russian, You
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.241.---)
Date: December 05, 2021 07:24AM

She saw through color
Like the man who saw through time—


I love these lines, Peter, but I'm not sure I understand the reference to Nostradamus. All in all, this is one of the best poems that you've shared with us.

Joe


Re: You Crazy Russian, You
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: December 05, 2021 12:03PM

Thanks, Joseph...I am not sure I myself have ever understood whatever relation I have to N. even here, where I wasn't aware I was channeling him, even when I was.

Thanks for making it explicit.

Peter


Re: You Crazy Russian, You
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (24.189.156.---)
Date: December 06, 2021 11:09AM

"Get outta here, you crazy Russian! "

Rick Blaine - Casablanca


Re: You Crazy Russian, You
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: December 06, 2021 06:11PM

oh, yes, Johnny, we'll always have Rick's Place.


Re: You Crazy Russian, You
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.185.193.---)
Date: December 08, 2021 09:16PM

Peter, this is sexy somehow. It seems different. I like that your style is morphing...keeps getting better.




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