(remembering...)


you trace the trail of my spine
with your tongue-dashed kisses
a slow traveling sensation
of time-taking excellence

a sigh-
a whisper-

such profound declarations
part my lips to warm your heart

everlasting wonder excites me
thinking of all of your tenderness
that I have yet to discover

a confession-
a promise-

you crash over me in waves
and swiftly carry me to the edge-
so fluid is the motion of our love…

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 11/18/2008 01:02AM by frost42_24.

frosty,

sensuous, and unique

I always look forward to your postings.

amo,

Peter

Very steamy, another fine read, Frosty.


Les

Peter, thank you. I am pleased that you enjoyed it...

Les, thanks for your comments as well.

PS Both of your comments are especially meaningful since I relate to your poems as well...

Well expressed. I first doubted the depth, and thought it too blunt. Then on second read the feeling hit me squarely and the mood softened. The passion is admirable and so is your sincerity of the telling.
Steve

Steve,

I'm glad your mood softened. Sometimes, it's good to tell it just like it is. I didn't think it was crude though, so I'm glad you liked it better the second time around. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. I do appreciate the feedback