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The Function of Toast
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: November 17, 2021 04:49PM

The Function of Toast

The Wrong Questions , Part Two

Breaking up eggs
Into bite-sized pieces
Where should I place
The light on the window-sill,
The dreams I did not dream,
Aboriginal feeling adrift in the lilacs?

The movement of shadow
Challenges my rewound memory
To silence and failure
For the sake of failure.

I feel like I’m on trial
For conveying dispassionate passion
In discontinuous images, while
Valorized harmony
Nudges sense aside.

Sopping up the leftover sauce
Is what the poems of old age are for.
Remember to put in the conjunctions
Or not…to make the reader think

Or not.


Re: The Function of Toast
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (68.194.80.---)
Date: November 17, 2021 05:01PM

"EAT MORE TOAST MAN!!!!!! WITHOUT TOAST THE WORLD WOULD BE BREADLESS TOAST FOR LIFE"

TOAST LUVER 17


Re: The Function of Toast
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: November 17, 2021 05:27PM

amen, brother


Re: The Function of Toast
Posted by: les712 (68.185.68.---)
Date: November 17, 2021 08:28PM

I love how you explore the daily rituals and come up with new meanings within them.


Les


Re: The Function of Toast
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: November 17, 2021 08:55PM

Thanks, Les. I do sometimes think I am on trial and that the jury is actually made up of different parts of myself that I have lost touch with. Sometimes I think the judge is someone I speak to often, but have never met...like you and K.Q. and Johnny and Mary and Terry etc.

Cheers,

Peter


Re: The Function of Toast
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (24.189.158.---)
Date: November 17, 2021 08:59PM

Moments before I read Peter's offering, I came across that quote in a comments section criticizing Chrysler's wanting a bailout and awarding bonuses to boot.


Deeper meanings


Re: The Function of Toast
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: November 17, 2021 10:27PM

There's the fun of allegorical thinking...it really does apply to more than one think(g)!

Thanks Johnny,

Peter


Re: The Function of Toast
Posted by: Steevo (66.82.9.---)
Date: November 19, 2021 11:54PM

Yes! Another beauty.
Toast works for this theme better than anything I've read. It touches what is going on from a great angle.
Steve

I thought of this old favorite when I read it.

It is too late now for earlier ways;
now there are only some other ways,
and only one way to find them- fail.

William Stafford


Re: The Function of Toast
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: November 20, 2021 12:29AM

Thanks, Steve. I admit I have not thought of Stafford for more than twenty years now. Thanks for the reminder,

Peter

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Re: The Function of Toast
Posted by: UPMarty (71.86.181.---)
Date: November 20, 2021 12:56AM

dispassionate passion is a very interesting thing to think about, Peter, and makes me smile that you said it. I would not ever wish to be your or anybody else's judge, although sometimes we get what we never wished for. Growing up in an attorney's house does have its drawbacks.

As Marie Antoinette might have said, "Let them eat toast!"

Mary


Re: The Function of Toast
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: November 20, 2021 05:15AM

Strangely enough, Mary, we all judge each other and ourselves every day of our lives. The trick is to also be generous, both to others and to otherselves.

pax,

Peter


Re: The Function of Toast
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: November 20, 2021 05:16AM

Strangely enough, Mary, we all judge each other and ourselves every day of our lives. The trick is to also be generous, both to others and to ourselves.

pax,

Peter


Re: The Function of Toast
Posted by: Merc (75.208.69.---)
Date: January 05, 2022 11:03AM

Without toast the jelly would make all your fingers sticky.


Re: The Function of Toast
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: January 05, 2022 02:08PM

It does anyway...

and

Where should I place
The light on the window-sill,
The dreams I did not dream,
Aboriginal feeling adrift in the lilacs? = my imagination.

The poem is the work of the imagination.




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