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Silence and solitude
Posted by: Gouwerijns (86.92.240.---)
Date: November 13, 2021 01:15AM

Enveloped in the exquisiteness
Micro viable to the splendors
Breath taken while natures whispers
Alone yet surrounded by existence

Gouwerijn

My moto's Those who ask question shall know answers.:>>> wie vraagt wie weet. Those who darenot ask shall never know. ::>>> wie niet vraagt wie niet weet.

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 11/13/2008 01:16AM by Gouwerijns.


Re: Silence and solitude
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.241.---)
Date: November 17, 2021 05:16PM

alone yet surrounded by existence

A difficult state to achieve, but one certainly worth striving for on occasion - that is, as long as one is aware that a return to the consciousness of reality is necessary.

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 11/17/2008 05:17PM by hpesoj.


Re: Silence and solitude
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: November 17, 2021 05:23PM

Joseph,

Don't confuse reality with existence, or the other way around.

Fine poem, Carolyn.

Peter


Re: Silence and solitude
Posted by: Gouwerijns (86.92.240.---)
Date: November 18, 2021 01:15AM

@ hpesoj and peterz thnx glad you like it. smiling smileysmiling smileysmiling smiley

Gouwerijn

My moto's Those who ask question shall know answers.:>>> wie vraagt wie weet. Those who darenot ask shall never know. ::>>> wie niet vraagt wie niet weet.




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