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Fishermen
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (68.194.80.---)
Date: November 11, 2021 03:51PM

The Capulets, usurping Heine, they slew
The underestimated few
When Seminoles drank
Gatorade along the Georgian shore
They’d wade
But Balder really
Had more hair
As mistletoe
Flew through the air


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Re: Fishermen
Posted by: Steevo (69.19.14.---)
Date: November 11, 2021 09:58PM

Ahh. I have missed your writing.
Totally incomprehensible collections of phrases that let me jump in at any word or phrase and make up my own meaning.

I saw Robert Bly this past weekend. He is fond of stopping in the middle of reading one of his own poems and saying "I don't know what the hell that means, but it sounded good."

Steevo


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Re: Fishermen
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (24.189.158.---)
Date: November 11, 2021 11:55PM

I like that quote, as it should be !


Thanks Steevo


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