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Seeing the Forest
Posted by: marflow (76.181.38.---)
Date: November 08, 2021 10:50AM

From a distance, trees stand
as a copper canopy connected
through the grey capillaried branches
-Interspersed-
with neighboring reaches
like dreams that intersect
in likemindedness
intercoursed with shudders of occasional breezes.

I crack twigs underfoot
as shadows lean to the right
pointing the way around
to the sunset
Hearing the whispered rushes of
copperleaves in the wind
at my back.


Re: Seeing the Forest
Posted by: lifeisbutadream (94.249.70.---)
Date: November 08, 2021 04:40PM

like dreams that intersect
in likemindedness

I love this in addition to my appreciation of the internal music of your poem. It was a pleasure to read!

K.Q.


Re: Seeing the Forest
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: November 08, 2021 05:37PM

Some good images here,

Peter


Re: Seeing the Forest
Posted by: redmitten (216.187.184.---)
Date: November 10, 2021 05:35PM

i like the idea of the branches/dreams.


Re: Seeing the Forest
Posted by: les712 (66.189.172.---)
Date: November 12, 2021 02:40AM

A good read Marflow, I enjoyed this one.


Les




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