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Alive Again
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: November 01, 2021 04:30PM

Alive Again

Cambridge holding to
Street-side walk
Slow forward love
Contrapuntal
Red brick Harvard
Green trim green life
Music in Harvard square
Today the flute says
Keep going baby
Cops look away
The afternoon rain
Trains us to look down
Chiasmic
Watch our feet
No big deal baby


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Re: Alive Again
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (24.189.158.---)
Date: November 01, 2021 06:33PM

Cambridge contrapuntal, cops chiasmic

those are the Cs


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Re: Alive Again
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: November 02, 2021 12:46AM

I see what you mean...thanks for the close reading.

Peter


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Re: Alive Again
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (24.189.158.---)
Date: November 02, 2021 09:05AM

looking down but ever forward as the rain allays suspicions


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