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Maldemerr
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (66.134.172.---)
Date: July 17, 2021 11:53AM

Waldemar

Formidable and Shatterproof
maintain a sense of order
When a threat
(collapsing wallboard)
Still is hung up at the border

Bequest deceived
Irately over
Growing with impieties
Appropriate to show
A sense
Of rhythm in societies

And the Conservation instigates
The Ripper to unravel
Staying briefly by the busboys
On his way to bang the gavel


Re: Maldemerr
Posted by: redmitten (216.187.184.---)
Date: July 17, 2021 02:53PM

still thinking about this poem, but that last stanza reminds me of a few political bullies out here in the west who hide just like this..

mitts


Re: Maldemerr
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (24.45.167.---)
Date: July 17, 2021 11:53PM

It must be all part of this really odd musical

with bodrhans a playing


Re: Maldemerr
Posted by: redmitten (71.36.194.---)
Date: July 18, 2021 12:08AM

bodrhans are second on my list to master, right after a hammer-on dulcimer.

but back to the music a playin...there's this irish capital in this here state where some clever a hidin out goes on...


Re: Maldemerr
Posted by: easyeverett (75.170.198.---)
Date: March 05, 2022 04:25PM

Johnny I had some time today to browse
through quite a number of your posts. I
like to stay with one poet who catches
my addictions early, yourself and a few others
here are providing me great pleasure without
renumeration. I love your incredible fusion
of intellect, which is quite ecclectic, and
traditional respect for the artform through
your uniquely intelligent application of poetics,
which yours like fine red wine has aged by
patient osmosis and love for the art. super. tom


Re: Maldemerr
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (24.189.156.---)
Date: March 06, 2022 02:37AM

thanks tom

As I've said previously, my main intent is to perpetuate an enigmatic style and a wish on my part to defy classification and simplistic interpretation, as well as to create something not easily digested by readers intent on reaching some sort of definite conclusion or arriving at an overall, tangible meaning which they can firmly grasp. But I do strive to make it sound good in any case !




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