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j.a.j.
Posted by: psychofemale (192.168.128.---)
Date: November 06, 2021 03:37PM

never thought i'd feel again,
it seems you proved me wrong.
never thought i'd love again
it seems it's been so long.
i'm finally touching surface
i've landed safe and sound
i've conquered all the battles
now on steady groud
i owe it all to you
you've helped me make it through
to overcome the past
move on from being used
i'm living in the future
forgetting how i hurt
forgetting all the tears
forgetting all their worth
i'll focus on what's real
and what makes me live to say
if you weren't in my life
i wouldn't make it through today

~and now you fade away, you're all i was before.~ one less reason


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Posted by: johnniegirl (192.168.128.---)
Date: November 06, 2021 04:06PM

forgetting all the tears
forgetting all their worth

this is very interesting. hope you will post more!

redmittengirl


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Re: j.a.j.
Posted by: JohnnySansCulo (192.168.128.---)
Date: November 06, 2021 05:30PM

very lyrical.....good


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Posted by: hrfarris (192.168.128.---)
Date: November 06, 2021 10:52PM

Alright ms. psychofemale.


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Re: j.a.j.
Posted by: Fickledlife (72.130.17.---)
Date: February 28, 2022 06:14PM

this has nice parts to it. you should post again!

-with love


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Re: j.a.j.
Posted by: jannypan (216.127.176.---)
Date: March 02, 2022 09:21PM

this has nice parts to it. you should post again!Aion Gold
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