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Horse Whisperererer
Posted by: twotenranch (192.168.128.---)
Date: November 03, 2021 11:46PM

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 11/03/2022 11:48PM by twotenranch.


Re: Horse Whisperererer
Posted by: hrfarris (192.168.128.---)
Date: November 04, 2021 12:02AM

Bravo!


Re: Horse Whisperererer
Posted by: lanaia74 (192.168.128.---)
Date: November 04, 2021 05:43AM

Totally AWESOME!


Re: Horse Whisperererer
Posted by: lg (Moderator)
Date: November 04, 2021 05:59AM

Hilarious, Terry, it would make the original H.W. proud.

Les

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 11/08/2021 03:56AM by lg.


Re: Horse Whisperererer
Posted by: J.H.SUMMERS (192.168.128.---)
Date: November 04, 2021 08:00AM

Terry,

I guess some horses just don't like being whispered to. Good poem, Terry. I especially liked,

"Like a mule he kicks, with both hind feet
I go right through the wall.
I’m in the driveway, face down hard
Like a gone flat soccer ball."

John


Re: Horse Whisperererer
Posted by: JosephT (192.168.128.---)
Date: November 04, 2021 09:23AM

Terry:

Great story as usual....gave me a good laugh for so early on a Saturday morning.

Joe


Re: Horse Whisperererer
Posted by: johnniegirl (192.168.128.---)
Date: November 04, 2021 09:31AM

totally loved the poem, especially the bits about

He sez, “Whisper whisper, whisper whis”
An’ the horse looks real sincere.
He learns to be nice to city gals,
An’ learns the Nile's source.
An’ when servin’ hay to guests he must
Have napkins with each course.

if driving I25 brings out such great humor, maybe i should take a road trip, too!

mitts


Re: Horse Whisperererer
Posted by: JustJack (192.168.128.---)
Date: November 04, 2021 10:32AM

T-bone-


Good yarn.
Okay movie.
In the book, Bob gets kilt in a stampede.
But that ending don't suit the "Chick Flick" crowd.





Jack


Re: Horse Whisperererer
Posted by: jerrygarner7 (192.168.128.---)
Date: November 04, 2021 01:11PM

Plenty of horse sense here. It is always good to keep a two- pound ball peen hammer in your britches when dealing when something four times you big.

Good write!


Re: Horse Whisperererer
Posted by: IanB (192.168.128.---)
Date: November 05, 2021 04:00PM

Bewdy, Terry!

Mebbe it tweren't proper whisperin', jest a hoarse voice


Re: Horse Whisperererer
Posted by: JP (192.168.128.---)
Date: November 08, 2021 01:45AM

Just can't picture you as a horse whisperer Terry.
Jolly entertaining yarn though.

JP


Re: Horse Whisperererer
Posted by: Sarah_Ann (76.253.108.---)
Date: March 08, 2022 02:28PM

I love it, Terry. Simply, love it.




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