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Manpower
Posted by: JohnnySansCulo (192.168.128.---)
Date: June 27, 2021 11:37AM

An afterthought now extradited
Segmentation stays in style
Donated sunlight through the mica
Falling sooty all the while

Sam Simian, to this he lent
A narrative that sets the tone
Divisible by Orwell’s vent
Fermented shades of Coppertone


Re: Manpower
Posted by: lg (Moderator)
Date: June 27, 2021 12:07PM

I like the Coppertone, but it does smell. I'm against segmentation.

Les


Re: Manpower
Posted by: JohnnySansCulo (192.168.128.---)
Date: June 27, 2021 12:10PM

Do you support fixed chairs, or do you support the swivel rights movement?


Re: Manpower
Posted by: JohnnySansCulo (192.168.128.---)
Date: June 27, 2021 12:54PM

From what I recall from those times, they didn't want the black and white people at the same lunch counters, probably because of those stools which rotated, and likely the blacks rotated in a different direction than the whites which would have resulted in unwanted contact between the races or something.

Either that or they didn't want mixed-race chewing gum stuck together under the counter.




Re: Manpower
Posted by: Tulach (192.168.128.---)
Date: June 27, 2021 01:43PM

so this is where the rotato/potato poems lead

no rotato while eating your potato...

a really good piece..........though unsure as to Donated...

Tulach


Re: Manpower
Posted by: JohnnySansCulo (192.168.128.---)
Date: June 27, 2021 02:11PM

Thanks Tulach...I was considering "divided" instead of "donated"

Divided would have gone with extradited style mica, but donated went with segmentation and stays


Re: Manpower
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (24.189.158.---)
Date: November 02, 2021 08:53AM

the only difference between liberals and conservatives is which rights they want to take away




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