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check out my poem music of your breath (adult)
Posted by: aradia (---.230.90.104.Dial1.Houston1.Level3.net)
Date: April 14, 2022 09:34PM

id really appreciate any critue if you can grasp my true meaning of ths poem


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Re: check out my poem music of your breath (adult)
Posted by: Hugh Clary (---.denver-04rh16rt.co.dial-access.att.net)
Date: April 15, 2022 11:53AM

The music of your breath,
caresses my deepest soul,

That's as far as I could get before gagging and clicking away, so I am probably no judge.


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Re: check out my poem music of your breath (adult)
Posted by: JohnnySansCulo (---.nycmny83.covad.net)
Date: April 15, 2022 11:54AM

Judge not, lest the cat steal your socks


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