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I need some opinions about my poetry
Posted by: Cassio Aurelio (---.virtua.com.br)
Date: April 26, 2022 01:51PM

PARALYZED

There's nothing wrong with my brains,
Muscles, nerves, intelligence, equilibrium;
So why do I have to live in chains,
Like slave statues standing in a museum?

To have eyes and not see,
To have feet and not walk,
That's my disgraceful destiny:
To live within a door that will never unlock.


Re: I need some opinions about my poetry
Posted by: Les (---.trlck.ca.charter.com)
Date: April 26, 2022 02:46PM

Post these in the User Submitted Poetry forum and you will probably get some responses.

Les




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