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Give your opinions about my poem
Posted by: Cassio Aurelio (---.virtua.com.br)
Date: April 26, 2022 01:50PM

OVERRUN
Sudden impact on the ground:
Blood, pain, desperation.
There's nothing to be found
In this dead body stagnation.


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Re: Give your opinions about my poem
Posted by: Hugh Clary (---.MCLNVA23.covad.net)
Date: April 26, 2022 03:13PM


I agree.


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